This is an utter crock of shit.
First, the article is attacking actual
dissent, and respectful, reasoned dissent on doctrine, equipment, etc.. has always been a core component of Marine Corps officer culture. The Marine Corps Gazette is the professional magazine for Marine officers, and you can see Lieutenants all the way up to general officers duking it out on various issues. Senior enlisted occasionally will chip in also. It's how you avoid groupthink.
Second, the criticisms of Force Design have been well-deserved and vocal, even if some ultimately find them unpersuasive. For me, this article actually proves the point of the critics:
"The Marine Corps looks to restructure around the concept of a Marine Littoral Regiment that can provide a “stand-in force” and conduct distributed operations in smaller formations throughout a contest littoral environment. The purpose of Force Design 2030 is to enable Marines to provide maritime defensive and offensive capabilities to a naval expeditionary force in support of a naval campaign, which requires divestments and investments in force structure and systems."
That is a pretty damn narrow mission, which is the exact point being made by the critics. And it's also a sufficiently narrow mission that you don't need 2.5 divisions and associated support dedicated to it.