Zero to low tolerance for bullshit and zero tolerance for PC/SJW bullshit in the workplace is what works against most veterans.
If you tell it "succinctly", more often than not, it'll hurt you. You have to "frame" it using all of the current buzzwords.
I had a manager with no mil background write me up for "...walking a fine line between telling people what they needed to hear and being respectful in the workplace." To which I promptly replied "bullshit".