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She Walks
« on: October 11, 2014, 09:04:11 pm »
Here's a little piece I wrote:

SHE WALKS  
A Halloween Tale
by Lea D.

She walks in the heavy warm night air,
a full moon’s silvery light illuminates her way.
Silently, and with clear intent, she crosses the meadow.
The faint scent of jasmine lingers in her wake,
and her long black hair flows like ink spilling down her back.

She walks to a gate as her steps start to quicken,
the night creatures fall silent as she passes.
Blind to falling stars streaking the sky,
she enters the gate and only the hushed rustle
of her silk gown breaks the stillness of the night.

She walks past the white marble stones before her,
and moves toward one stone where a seraphic angel
looks down in repose – here, at last!
She is drawn to the grave - and the stars, and the moon,
and even time itself, stops momentarily - for an eternity.

She walks quickly now, pale arms reach
and she coos a soft greeting to a faint wee whimper.
A mother’s love stronger than the bonds of life and death,
the babe finally in her arms, serene with the dulcet sounds
of a lullaby faintly audible in the still night.

She walks through the night as the moon crosses the sky,
fire-flies drift around her in the warm night air,
until their evanescence in the approaching new day.
Daylight coming, she moves slowly back to the angel stone,
and tenderly gives up the child to her eternal resting place.

She walks again past the stones to the gate, the sun’s fire
rising in the east as the day creatures start to awaken.
Slower now, rustling silk and faint jasmine, she moves
back across the meadow, glassy eyes and ice in her veins,
and she slowly vanishes into the morning mist - as she walks.
« Last Edit: October 11, 2014, 09:32:25 pm by alicewonders »
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Re: She Walks
« Reply #1 on: October 11, 2014, 09:09:04 pm »
Very good....I loved it!
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« Reply #2 on: October 11, 2014, 09:10:58 pm »
Very good....I loved it!

Thanks Mystery - I appreciate that!
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« Reply #3 on: October 11, 2014, 10:47:51 pm »
I rather liked that, Alice.  Thanks.
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Re: She Walks
« Reply #4 on: October 11, 2014, 10:57:37 pm »
I rather liked that, Alice.  Thanks.

Thanks Cyber Liberty - I thought it would be a nice spooky tale.
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Re: She Walks
« Reply #5 on: October 11, 2014, 11:24:51 pm »
Very nice, Leah!   :beer:
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« Reply #6 on: October 11, 2014, 11:31:01 pm »
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Re: She Walks
« Reply #7 on: October 14, 2014, 03:59:14 am »
Really well done. You should publish it!
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« Reply #8 on: October 14, 2014, 04:01:04 am »
Really well done. You should publish it!

Thank you so much Pzldr!  I might try to do that, glad you enjoyed it.

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« Reply #9 on: October 14, 2014, 08:45:54 pm »
I really enjoyed that!  Seriously - I did.  It drew me in.  Nicely done!
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« Reply #10 on: October 14, 2014, 09:42:37 pm »
I really enjoyed that!  Seriously - I did.  It drew me in.  Nicely done!

That's a high compliment, thanks Lando!
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Re: She Walks
« Reply #11 on: October 14, 2014, 09:44:07 pm »

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« Reply #12 on: October 14, 2014, 09:52:00 pm »
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« Reply #13 on: October 14, 2014, 09:54:34 pm »
Really well done. You should publish it!

I second the motion!
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« Reply #14 on: October 14, 2014, 09:58:40 pm »
Oooh, eerie!  Nice work Victor!

I figured you and others could post it on Facebook as a photo.  Might as well try to make it go viral.  That's what the Internet is for.

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« Reply #15 on: October 14, 2014, 10:06:03 pm »
I figured you and others could post it on Facebook as a photo.  Might as well try to make it go viral.  That's what the Internet is for.

Well, I swiped it and put it on my FB, but I'm a bit of a backwater there....
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« Reply #16 on: October 14, 2014, 11:33:42 pm »
I figured you and others could post it on Facebook as a photo.  Might as well try to make it go viral.  That's what the Internet is for.

Wow- thanks Victor!  I'll do that!

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« Reply #18 on: October 14, 2014, 11:37:58 pm »
Well, I swiped it and put it on my FB, but I'm a bit of a backwater there....

That's so neat Cyber Liberty - I like that!

(I know what you mean, I only have seventy-some friends on FB - not like some people I know that have thousands of friends!  I don't know how they keep up!)

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« Reply #19 on: October 15, 2014, 12:07:32 am »
I'll post it..I have a few friends..hehe
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« Reply #20 on: October 15, 2014, 12:13:37 am »
I posted it.  Thank you all!
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Re: She Walks
« Reply #21 on: October 15, 2014, 12:18:46 am »
It was awesome Lea.  Thank you for sharing. 
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« Reply #22 on: October 15, 2014, 12:21:28 am »
I think it deserves a headline, Nancy.

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« Reply #23 on: October 15, 2014, 12:30:25 am »
It was awesome Lea.  Thank you for sharing.

Thanks MAC - I had a lot of fun writing it.  Some things just come together.   :beer:
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« Reply #24 on: October 15, 2014, 12:47:51 am »
I'll post it..I have a few friends..hehe

I will post it too! I have a few friends and them somee  :whistle: :whistle: :whistle:


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