If the analyst thinks that many PhDs are aware of those grammatical/punctuation errors, then she needs only look at her own analysis, where she incorrectly suggests the reflexive pronoun should be used where it doesn't belong (#5 and #6). I could go point-by-point (e.g., the most common reason for a font-size mismatch is when someone is pasting in a word to avoid misspelling it), but suffice it to say that this analysis doesn't hold water.
There are, of course, legitimate points, nonetheless (#14).